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[The End of Earth]

The Beginning of Something Better

I loved this one.
Great, great animation. I've never seen this kind of detail, fondness and dedication with pixel animation.
Usually, I see these animations always in the same "standards", in a typical kind of animation that we're all used to see everywhere.
But you seriously diserve credits for making all this so noteworthy, beautiful in a type of animation that suffers from the lack of preciousness of its lines but gains strength through its potential that you so clearly denote here.
Wonderful job.
Must say, not perfect.
But a great job.

To Be Continued...?

;D

[FTG]

May I have your attention please?

You should pay more attention to the colors, speccialy the background, and the font and how the letters themselves appear on the screen.
Besides that, it's a good try.
Hope it's going to get a good mark
;)

rafaelcanato responds:

I chose that color and background with meaning. They're color and "mood" ain't so "coloured" nor "happy" so I meant that to appear "dark". The font is their font on album the part that says "For The Glory - Some kids have no face". And how the letters appear, well, it sucks...

Thanks for your time, attention and advice.

Peace,
rafaelcanato.

[Stick Domination]

Stick Domination, indeed

The animation is solid, altough short.
Very entertaining.
The shadows are very good.
The only thing that doesn't fit in the rest is the sky.
But besides that, well done, lad.
Continue the good work
Seriously ;)

[The Best Video Game Ever]

The best?

Pointless animation.
You titled it as "The Best Video Game Ever".
In the beginning, we see Street Fighter and we think it's going to be about it.
But then you introduce Megatron playing Donkey Kong, Darth Vader eating cheeseballs and, worst of all, a political character without any sense of critic. And that goes for the Africa joke as well, with no point in the context.
The animation is maybe the only aspect that could be availed, altough improved.
Try thinking more about what you want on your animation the next time.
And don't trick us with these titles.

DarkMatter responds:

you gave me 0 stars because you didn't like the title? lol

[Invaders Tom and Ted]

Not invaders

I liked the Tom and Ted animation at the beginning.
But then the rest was sloppy and without inspiration.
And it was too short to make any impact.
I was expecting much more.

[the hallway]

What about the living room?

Great animation, great artwork
but was expecting something a bit longer
:(

Maybe for the next time,
no?
;)

Sinapi responds:

sorry about that, that why i put in the description a "very short loop" ^^U
but oh well, it was my first animation in another program that it wasnt flash so i just wanna do something quik to try XD

[Gabi Is Meat]

Show us some more, please

Nice, but not that much
Good drawing, very nice, seriously.
Now, I would like to see something longer, with a history.
Nice challenge, no?

;)

[EEnE Z Episode 11]

Animate more, write less

This is not a movie.
This is just a bunch of text with some animated characters in between.
You should try to use voice acting instead of lots and lots AND LOTS of text.
It get's boring to read so much text. Not even in the comics there's so much text. And this is a flash animation, not a comic.
Animate more, write less.
Sorry being so blunt, but try to understand my advice, ok?
;)

SSJ5G responds:

I would, but if I did it all on my own, I fear everyone would sound almost the same. Besides, I already asked, but not enough people turned up for roles.

I generally put plot over animation.

Also, some of my viewers have said that they preferred the text boxes when I first contemplated the acting.

[Vlikevince's Room]

Don't let yourself be killed

I like the idea of a person going mad over time, trapped in a room, without knowing time and space. The art of the room itself gives that idea of our mind making us feel lost over time.
But then, the character(s?) animation has nothing to do with the room ambiance, the voice work is very poor and you could have developed his madness, without giving it a face, like it was the devil.
But of course, you would need more time.
But I'm sure it would be worth it.
;)

[Meet Larry]

Glad I met Larry

Wonderful voice work, great music.
A stylish animation, with a great story.
I loved it ;)

MonkFlash responds:

thanks alot